Sunday, December 6, 2009

My Final Narrative

The revisions to my personal narrative are going great. I've been able to fix everything that my professor told me needed to be fixed. Except for the title. I titled my personal narrative "A Tragic Realization" because in the story I realize how much my parents look out for me but, it takes getting my knee destroyed to figure that out. That is why I used the word tragic, because hurting my knee was a tragic incident. But I know my professor knows best so I'm going to change it. I just have no idea what it is that I'm going to change it to. Oh well I'll figure something out.

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