My Narrative Conference

Turns out my personal narrative was not as bad as I thought. I was under the impression that it was going to get torn apart. But she said it was "good" minus all the mistakes I made. They should be easy to fix though. The main problem is making my central message show without just coming out and bluntly saying it. This will definitely prove to be a formidable problem because I don't want to make my message subtle. I want to make sure that anyone who reads my story will be able tell exactly what my message is without having to think about it. I think its easier that way.