My Realization

So this week is not going to be near as bad as I had previously thought. My bio test isn't until next week and I;m understanding the things we're learning about in chem. The chem test is going to be so much easier because of that. And because of english class yesterday i now know what i need to do to fix my narrative. I didn't make the central message subtle enough, in fact I just came out and said exactly what it was. I wanted to make sure that anyone who read it would have no problem figuring out the message, but apparently you have to make them think about it and draw their own conclusion from the story. That being said I have some work to do. I'll have to rethink some of my story to make the message come through without having to just say it. I've definitely got some work to do.